I have come up with some more ideas for my opening, as I said in my earlier post, the opening will be a nightmare that the character is having. It will start with him trying to wash blood off his hands but however hard he tries he can't get rid of it. He then looks in the mirror and in the reflection he sees the woman he killed with bruises and injurys all over her, he runs out of the bathroom and suddenly he ends up on the roof of a building and he is cornered, he hears the woman footsteps coming up the stairs towards him so he jumps from the roof and that is where he will wake up and the scene ends.
In the bathroom, I will use a white sink to symbolise innocence, which is then stained with the blood. The blood not coming off his hands represents him no being able to get rid of the guilt of killing the woman.
Evaluation of foundation portfolio
16 years ago
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hello ben
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